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(These days, there is growing debate about the lives of immgrant families.)

These days, there is growing debate about the lives of immgrant families.

(While some people believe that their children receive benefits from a foreign environment,)

While some people believe that their children receive benefits from a foreign environment,

(others feel that they will face certain callenges.)

others feel that they will face certain callenges.

(This essay discusses both views, and I will explain why I support the first opinion,)

This essay discusses both views, and I will explain why I support the first opinion,

(as children can easily acquire a second language and have the opportunity to gain dual citizenship.)

as children can easily acquire a second language and have the opportunity to gain dual citizenship.

(On the one hand, there are concerns about children growing up in a foreign environment.)

On the one hand, there are concerns about children growing up in a foreign environment.

(They will have different experiences conpared to their parents.)

They will have different experiences conpared to their parents.

(This means that parents may not be familiar with the culture, habits, and behaviors of the new place.)

This means that parents may not be familiar with the culture, habits, and behaviors of the new place.

(As a result, a cultural gap could develop between parents and children.)

As a result, a cultural gap could develop between parents and children.

(If children are not given proper guidances and advices from their parents,)

If children are not given proper guidances and advices from their parents,

(they struggle with certain aspects of their lives.)

they struggle with certain aspects of their lives.

(On the other hand, there are many positive impacts on children.)

On the other hand, there are many positive impacts on children.

(Firstly, if the local community speaks a different language,)

Firstly, if the local community speaks a different language,

(children will be able to learn a second language more quickly.)

children will be able to learn a second language more quickly.

(Language acquisition takes time, but being in a foreign environment accelerates this process,)

Language acquisition takes time, but being in a foreign environment accelerates this process,

(allowing children to become bilingual, which is a significant advantage for their future.)

allowing children to become bilingual, which is a significant advantage for their future.

(Secondly, they have the opportunity to obtain dual citizenship.)

Secondly, they have the opportunity to obtain dual citizenship.

(While acquiring permanent residency usually involves many challenges and efforts,)

While acquiring permanent residency usually involves many challenges and efforts,

(children may gain it more easily without facing such difficulties.)

children may gain it more easily without facing such difficulties.

(In conclusion, although children would face some difficulties when their families move overseas,)

In conclusion, although children would face some difficulties when their families move overseas,