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(which not only made the learning process enjoyable but also significantly enhanced my language skills.)

which not only made the learning process enjoyable but also significantly enhanced my language skills.

(the potential benefit far outweigh the initial struggles.)

the potential benefit far outweigh the initial struggles.

(significantly to a better quality of life.)

significantly to a better quality of life.

(must be consider in order to end of)

must be consider in order to end of

(However there are some drawbacks such as A and B)

However there are some drawbacks such as A and B

(benefit A outweigh the drawback.)

benefit A outweigh the drawback.

(This essay delves into the reason behind this trend such as A and B.)

This essay delves into the reason behind this trend such as A and B.

(Addressing this issue requires comprehensive solutions, including A and B.)

Addressing this issue requires comprehensive solutions, including A and B.

(common in many people's lives.)

common in many people's lives.

(however, prolong stress can negatively impact their health.)

however, prolong stress can negatively impact their health.

(This process involves numerous A and requires siginificant B.)

This process involves numerous A and requires siginificant B.

(likely high crime areas.)

likely high crime areas.

(measures are put into place.)

measures are put into place.

(balancing both aspects is the best approach.)

balancing both aspects is the best approach.

(A case in point is people in my country(Japan))

A case in point is people in my country(Japan)

(Another way to achieve happiness is by building good relationship.)

Another way to achieve happiness is by building good relationship.

(effective communication is the solo key.)

effective communication is the solo key.

(B can lead to imporved overall A)

B can lead to imporved overall A

(Besides the financial benefits, the plan also offers significant social advantages. )

Besides the financial benefits, the plan also offers significant social advantages.

(Whereas many people prefer working in an office, others find remote work more productive.)

Whereas many people prefer working in an office, others find remote work more productive.